Pierre Boulanger
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Happy Birthday Cher
I submitted my first attempt recently and would much appreciate feedback from anyone who is willing to have a read.
I am also curious as to suggestions for what category I should have asked for this story to be placed in. It doesn't have a single theme, so I just used the catch - all category
Unless I really screwed this up, the hyperlink above should take you there... if not, it is "Happy Birthday Cher" in Erotic Couplings. (Don't you just hate newbies?)
Thanks in advance!
Pierre B
I submitted my first attempt recently and would much appreciate feedback from anyone who is willing to have a read.
I am also curious as to suggestions for what category I should have asked for this story to be placed in. It doesn't have a single theme, so I just used the catch - all category
Unless I really screwed this up, the hyperlink above should take you there... if not, it is "Happy Birthday Cher" in Erotic Couplings. (Don't you just hate newbies?)
Thanks in advance!
Pierre B
