First Story Feedback

[ScottieDog61]

My first post to Literotica is "With Wendy's Guidance". I've read many of the tales, and decided to add my own to the mix. The response has been pretty good, and I'd like to maintain the same level of quality and story-telling to my next stories.

I know what I like about the story, but I'd like to know some things from others who read it:

What attracted you to the story?

Did you like the title and description?

Anything you particularly liked/disliked about the framing story, i.e., how the character's "get there"?

What did you like/dislike about the sex scenes?

Thanks in advance for any feedback!

--ScottieDog61

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Help is out a little, Scottie. Add a link to the story, and if it's not too much trouble, specify which category it is filed under.

 

[ScottieDog61]

Story Location

Whoops! Sorry, I kind of left that detail out. It's under "Gay Male", and the URL is

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=491601

Anyway, now you know where to find it.

Thanks.

--ScottieDog61

 

[OnnaDare]

God damn. You're really a good writer. Very direct, very...male. Je l'ai adoré!
If you would like to read my first story - I'd love to hear your opinion!
There's a thread. for it...a bit down the page.
Onna