First story (Exhibitionism & Voyeur) - would love some feedback!

[Liunae]

Hello all! I'm new to this community and happy to be here with you all.

I've just published my first story - well, first two stories really; parts one and two of a series that I intend to be five parts. I would love to get some feedback on the stories, as this is my first foray into erotic writing.

Writing Retreat Pt. 01: Forbidden Tryst

Writing Retreat Pt. 02: Grant's Office

Part three is being written now and will come soon!

Thanks in advance
Liunae