First Romance Story

[Submissioness]

I'm interested in what people think about this new story that I submitted in the Romance category but no one seems to want to comment on it! I think it's my best work to date, personally. I'd just like to get someone to tell me what they liked or didn't like about it!

I would appreciate your time.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=435634


Submissioness

 

[hardtaskmaster]

Kept my interest - good stuff!

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