First Popular Story

[ShyMagpie]

First Popular Story - Feedback please

I wrote this one on a whim and it seems to be a winner.

http://www.literotica.com/s/annie-rides-the-train

It's getting high votes but if I can get some feedback on how to make future stories better I would appreciate it.

Thanks all! Oh, and enjoy the story.

 

[masterandmargarita]

You did a great job setting up the blindfold situation and playing it out. A fearful situation for some readers and a hot one for others, but either way it made for a good read.