First one out of the way
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MmMmMm.... Sexyslut2. Not bad for a first story. I thought it could have been longer, but it certainly did it for me. (I just LOVE a girl who swallows 
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Keep 'em coming, hon... I think you've got the ideas to turn out some great erotica... (Actually I was hoping to join those two in the bubble bath...hee hee)
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---- Love is the one thing you cannot buy...There are some interesting substitutes, but the REAL thing must be freely given----
(Who said that? ...Dunno, I just made it up!)
)Keep 'em coming, hon... I think you've got the ideas to turn out some great erotica... (Actually I was hoping to join those two in the bubble bath...hee hee)
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---- Love is the one thing you cannot buy...There are some interesting substitutes, but the REAL thing must be freely given----
(Who said that? ...Dunno, I just made it up!)
SexySlut2
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Second part posted...
They finally posted the second part to my story!!
Here's the link:my story pt.2
They finally posted the second part to my story!!
Here's the link:my story pt.2
Hmmm...nice story!! Not to unrealistic...just good old fashion sexual tension and fun!!!
You say it was your first?? Damn! There are so many good writers on here. here's mine......
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39949
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I just had the chance to read your story and I liked it.
The little insert about composing your thoughts made me laugh!
dvlinblue said:Hmmm...nice story!! Not to unrealistic...just good old fashion sexual tension and fun!!!
You say it was your first?? Damn! There are so many good writers on here. here's mine......
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39949
I just had the chance to read your story and I liked it.
The little insert about composing your thoughts made me laugh!
Re: Re:
Thanks very much. It doesn't go over so well with male readers but I wasn't writing for them.
What could I have done to add to the heat???
SexySlut2 said:
I just had the chance to read your story and I liked it.
The little insert about composing your thoughts made me laugh!
Thanks very much. It doesn't go over so well with male readers but I wasn't writing for them.
What could I have done to add to the heat???
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