First non-human story - feedback wanted

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I'd like some feedback on my first non-human category story, "The Hands of S.A.M." It was inspired by a masseuse I met in Tucson, Arizona.

Thanks in advance.

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http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=258261

 

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Notes:

The opening paragraph contains a redundancy - couldn't stop thiking, couldn't stop wondering... essentially you repeat yourself.

***
. She was a perfect hourglass shape with beautiful breasts and appeared fresh out of massage therapy school.

Is this something that is visible?
***

Some excess could be chopped but overall it is fairly tight and works well. I thought the ending was a little weak compared to the earlier sections - almost if you were bored and wished to end quickly.

Overall I liked it, even though non-human is not my favourite category (probably least favourite). Thank you for posting this story.