TotalKnockout
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- Joined
- Feb 6, 2014
- Posts
- 36
Hey y'all,
I'm new to this site, and my first longer story was just posted in the Erotic Couplings section today. If you have a moment, I'd love some constructive feedback. It's called "Our Dirty Secret Exposed" and it involves a young couple who lets their house guest watch while they do some pretty naughty things…
http://www.literotica.com/s/our-dirty-secret-exposed
I've written stories for this couple before, the shorter "Our Dirty Secret" and "Our Dirty Secret Pt. 2" are posted in the Anal category, and you're welcome to check them out.
(Also, just FYI, this story is written in 2nd person POV so if that's not your cup of tea, that's fine, you can skip this one.)
Thanks!
TKO
I'm new to this site, and my first longer story was just posted in the Erotic Couplings section today. If you have a moment, I'd love some constructive feedback. It's called "Our Dirty Secret Exposed" and it involves a young couple who lets their house guest watch while they do some pretty naughty things…
http://www.literotica.com/s/our-dirty-secret-exposed
I've written stories for this couple before, the shorter "Our Dirty Secret" and "Our Dirty Secret Pt. 2" are posted in the Anal category, and you're welcome to check them out.
(Also, just FYI, this story is written in 2nd person POV so if that's not your cup of tea, that's fine, you can skip this one.)
Thanks!
TKO
