first attempts at seduction

[LoveLace]

Could someone with nack for words please write about my fav fantasy...

A teenager experimenting with her awaking sexuality, teasing and seducing an older man, perhaps the Man she babysits for, or her bestfriends father... - yet still fully aware of the effect she has on him, seeing how far she can go, seeing how much she can torment him before he takes her...

I always picture a pool in my fantasy water and toplessness hmmm

I think I need to take a looooong hot bath and think about this some more!

please someone who can write HELP me!

LoveLace

 

[Tatewaki]

Resurrecting old but interesting post.

*BUMP*

-T

 

[Guest]

Resurrecting old but interesting post.

Why? There are lots of such stories on Lit. Three in the last week at least.

 

[Tatewaki]

Agreed, but how many of those were any good? The more the merrier I'm thinking.

-T

Why? There are lots of such stories on Lit. Three in the last week at least.

 

[Chicklet]

Why? There are lots of such stories on Lit. Three in the last week at least.

always room to add a new one with a nifty twist = )

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

always room to add a new one ...Chicklet

There you go volunteering again

 

[Chicklet]

Actually...

There you go volunteering again

I wasn't volunteering, for once, I just thought it was a good idea = )

 

[sirhugs]

Could someone with nack for words please write about my fav fantasy...

A teenager experimenting with her awaking sexuality, teasing and seducing an older man, perhaps the Man she babysits for, or her bestfriends father... - yet still fully aware of the effect she has on him, seeing how far she can go, seeing how much she can torment him before he takes her...

I always picture a pool in my fantasy water and toplessness hmmm

I think I need to take a looooong hot bath and think about this some more!

please someone who can write HELP me!

LoveLace

why don't you try a first draft, then email it to me for editing? I wont rip it off ( although if I like elementys, I may write them into another story). sirhugs@hotmail.com

come on, you can write, I know you can

 

[NASCARaddicted]

somehow this reminds me on this movie "Lolita" with Jeremy Irons. Dominique Swain (I think she was like 12 or 13) teased Jeremy Irons all the time.

So, this could be similar (of course, with a girl around 18). I think it would work, if this girl seduces a man that she knows for a long time. I mean, this guy knows her since she was a kid - and in his eyes, she still is a kid. But she is already 18, with a nice looking body. Maybe it's her uncle, or a close friend of her father, or maybe the friendly neighbor from next door.

So, it's very hot. The public pool is closed for repairs. And there is no lake or anything like this. Most people are on holiday or something, so this girl doesn't want to drive to the ocean (it's too far, and since she is alone, it would be boring, too).

But her uncle or maybe neighbor has a nice pool in the backyard. She goes over to his house, and asks him, if she could swim in the pool. (Maybe this guy is a single, or his wife is out of town for a few days.) The guy accepts - he also wants to swim in the pool. So the girl comes over. She wears a white bathing suit. It looks normal. But once it get's wet, the bathing suit becomes transparent (of course, the girl knows this). Her dark nipples are clearly visible, and so is her (shaven ?) pussy. The girl get's out of the pool, and the guy notices her transparent bathing suit - he stares at her nice nipples and her shaven crack. The girl of course notices this. (her plan works perfectly).
"Hey uncle Bob, is something wrong with my bathing suit ?"
"Well, it's - it's ... nice"
"Good. But I think I should take it off, I don't want to get sick, wearing this wet bathing suit".
"O.k. you can go inside the house to change it, if you want"
"Why should I ? I mean, no one can see me, so I can change it right here"
"Well, I can see you"
"Yeah, but you wouldn't be offended if I change it here, right ?"

So she takes the bathing suit off. Now she is standing there, completely naked. Out of respect, the guy covers his eyes.

"I think I am done", the girl says
The guy opens his eyes - but the girl is still naked.

"You see, it's such a nice day, I think I don't need a bathing suit at all. I hope you don't mind, seeing my naked body"

Then she lays down on a big towel and starts to put some suntan lotion on her body. She does it very slowly ... and all the times, her legs are wide open, so that he can clearly see her pussy ....

 

[Fyre of the Equinox]

why don't you try a first draft, then email it to me for editing?

LoveLace only posted 15 times at Lit. Only one of them was in this thread. I don't think she'll be back to read the suggestions on this thread or to write her own story.

 

[Chicklet]

Yeah...sadly it seems that the last post by LL was in January...

We can still steal the idea!

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Stealing!
Why, Chicklet! You naghty girl!

 

[Guest]

somehow this reminds me of this movie "Lolita" with Jeremy Irons. Dominique Swain (I think she was like 12 or 13) ...

The film was, IMHO, vastly inferior to the original book by Vladimir Nabokov.

The whole point of the story was that she was a nymphet and hence Nabokov would be banned from Literotica, as would Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, and some parts of the Bible. In common English usage the word "Lolita" has become a general noun for a sexually agressive small girl, just as "Lothario" is for a sexually predatory adult male.

BTW Is Lolita still published in the USA, or does this 18 rule also apply to printed matter in the "land of the free"?
~~ditto~~ Romeo and Juliet?
~~ditto~~ the Bible?