Finally: Thunderbird as it was meant

[LightningSeed]

Years ago I posted an experiment in Flash Fiction: 15 stories of 50 words each. Unfortunately, my lack of skill in making the story easy to read made it almost incomprehensible. I did - and have - heard from several readers who were able to decipher it in the intervening years. Now, finally, I’ve fixed it so it should be easier to read, and I am working on plans to expand it into a more fleshed-out story, all to complement this original version. Please let me know what you think:

Thunderbird Motel

 

[DeMont]

Um... good morning @LightningSeed, for a moment my all too old eyes thought you wrote, "Thunderbirds as it was meant to be" and I had fleeting visions of the puppet-o-tronic movie "Team America"...

Also had visions of Scott and Tin-Tin in Thunderbird 1 and of Lady Penelope and Parker on the bonnet of the Rolls...!!! (Gerry and Sylvia Anderson, 1965)

I'm going to read it, I promise.
Respectfully, D.