Finally: Thunderbird as it was meant

[LightningSeed]

Years ago I posted an experiment in Flash Fiction: 15 stories of 50 words each. Unfortunately, my lack of skill in making the story easy to read made it almost incomprehensible. I did - and have - heard from several readers who were able to decipher it in the intervening years. Now, finally, I’ve fixed it so it should be easier to read, and I am working on plans to expand it into a more fleshed-out story, all to complement this original version. Please let me know what you think:

Thunderbird Motel