Finally, as requested by many, a sequel

[AriaSilverfyre]

Well folks, after recieving many inquiries about writing a sequel to my tale Together Forever, I have done so. I hope it is not too long. I'm also not very sure if I created the flashback correctly. Please let me know.

Together Forever ch 2

Thanks a ton.

 

[damppanties]

Good story. I went back and read Chapter 1 first. I would have liked you to give me more details of her 'hunt' that went wrong. That would have moved your story forward.

About the flashback, It was well-done but I was, kind of, lost in it - which means that it was great writing. So perhaps you need to make the end of the flashback and the return to the present a little stronger.

Keep writing.

 

[AriaSilverfyre]

Thank you. I was hoping to have readers be lost in the flashback. I'm glad it was effective.