Feminization and Humiliation

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

I just submitted a new story and was hoping for some feedback on the themes. The plot is about a guy who meets his old high school crush (a bisexual) who has become a witch, and uses her powers to transform the guy into a girl (the spitting image of his mother, who the witch has wanted to bone since high school). She then proceeds to sex him up and bring home a man to fuck them both.

http://www.literotica.com/s/maria-the-witch

Thoughts?

 

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Anyone?