Female voice needed for story

[wallow2]

A young woman, Wilma, wants for the first time to do oral on her boyfriend Bob. But she doesn't know whether she would like it if he cums in her mouth. She's worried that he'll like it and she won't, introducing conflict into their relationship. She therefore goes to the story's narrator, her cousin (Yes, there's an incest aspect.) Chuck with whom she has a history that does not include intercourse or oral. She asks him if she can give him a blowjob where he cums in her mouth so she can see how she likes it without risking conflict with her boyfriend.

I would appreciate hearing from any women out there who could contribute to Wilma's dialogue, because I doubt my ability to write a woman character realistically.

 

[Husky_Embrace]

Though I'm no woman, I can give you some thoughts.

"A cousin? That would be moronic. I'm not touching that. I feel more comfortable getting slapped by a strangers dick and pumped full by a gang bang in my mouth than sex with family. I mean come on, I have a boyfriend. If there's anyone I would want to try this with in a safe space it's him. What kind of fucked up sex life do I have if I can't trust him?"

I feel incest is internet fantasy normal, but at least where I come from in real life it is frowned upon. No woman in my vicinity would even consider it.

I feel thus that it distracts from your question. You want the thoughts of a woman, but it would be too easy to get stuck on the incest part. Why not scrap it from your question? Normally the more background you have the better, but cheating on your boyfriend with an incestious relationship, 'because it feels safer' is so far out there that I doubt any woman can give accurate thoughts.

Focus on what you want. The thoughts of a woman who tries oral the first time, and if the guy should cum inside her mouth. The rest is fluff that you as a writer should offer.