female editor wanted for fucking machine story

[rthnck]

Hello,
I am halfway through a "fucking machine" story and I would like to find a female editor who can provide not just grammatical corrections but some comments or help with descriptions of how it might feel when using such a device for the first time. I'm giving it the old college try but as a male trying to delve into how it feels from the female point of view, I have some misgivings about my abilities to accurately describe it.

So while I don't think I need a "fucking machine" expert, I think I need the female viewpoint so I'd like to find a female editor. Maybe someone who enjoys their own toys.


If someone is interested I could send the first half of the story to get started. Links to my other stories are in my sig. Thanks.

 

[ms.read]

In response to your post...

I would love to read through your story. I am an Executive Beta Reader. If you are still loooking for that extra touch to your story please send me a pm.

 

[rthnck]

Still looking for an editor run their fingers through my story. See the first post.

 

[ms.read]

hey I sent you an email in response to your questions!!!:

 

[rthnck]

editing makes all the difference

My story was posted today

Fucking Machine Letters:Sandra

It's already getting some really good reviews and I have to give a lot of the credit to the two editors who read the story 'ms.read'and 'funwithryleigh'. They both gave me the female insight that was needed to take the story up a notch and make it sing.

I can't thank them enough. I find that writing a story is much easier than editing but while you have to start with a solid storyline the worth of an editor cannot be underestimated.

Thanks again.

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

Aww - you are most welcome. It was a great story to begin with, just needed a bit of tweaking with new eyes. Congrats on the great reviews.

I just PM'd you - I had difficulties when trying to read the story - didn't get the rest of it - to go to page 2. I tried a few other random stories - and had no problem... So - don't know what that is about.

As soon as I can access the full story - I'll leave ya a message.