Female beta reader wanted

[NdotA]

Hi,
I would be happy to find a female beta reader for the story that I have just drafted.
Narrator is a almost 50 year old woman, feeling the negative impact of age on her body. She uses a photosession to test her charms on the photographer. This being successful, it ends with intense sex. In fact, this is the female perspective of my story 'Photo Session' published her a few weeks ago (https://literotica.com/s/photo-session-6).

My problem: I am a male author and I do not know, if her mindset, the fluctuations of her mood, emotions, sensations, are credible as I describe it. And if my story would be appealing for female readers. You know, men have their difficulties to talk about emotions. I tried my best but I might have been carried away.

So I am looking for comments preferrably from female authors and/or editors on these items.

Story details: About 13.000 words, fiction, exhibitionism, voyeurism, role play, masturbation, straight sex, anal sex, analingus.

N.

 

[StillStunned]

You don't need a female perspective. Just write her as a person. People have been writing other genders for centuries - it's really not something to get worked up about.

You probably have more in common with your character than you do with a Chilean mineworker, or Croatian shepherd, or an 80-year-old Japanese man who's lived all his life in Tokyo. Look for the similarities, and they always begin with us all being people.