Female Authors Input Seeked

[FantasyGuyUK]

Hi there,

i'm a first time story writer, but i feel i need an experienced females input.

This is to present realistic female characters and genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and prespectives.

i have a few ideas already but im grateful for any input.

Thanks

FantasyGuyUK

 

[Guest]

Hi there,

i'm a first time story writer, but i feel i need an experienced females input.

This is to present realistic female characters and genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and prespectives.

i have a few ideas already but im grateful for any input.

Thanks

FantasyGuyUK

Input on what?

Do you have a story posted, you mean?

 

[Shakti_Dreamer]

Good luck with that.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Input on what?

Do you have a story posted, you mean?

I think he's confused, Sarrah. I think he means "Put Out"

 

[glynndah]

I think he's confused, Sarrah. I think he means "Put Out"

You didn't even invite him to the barbeque, Jenny. Tsk! Tsk!

A welcome for the little newbie from the good little witch.

 

[Guest]

"Seeked?"

He needs an editor... You think there's one for sold?

 

[Shakti_Dreamer]

I think he may need more than an editor. (smirk)

 

[TE999]

I think he may need more than an editor. (smirk)

Yeah--like where the 'Shift' key's located fr'instance.

Welcum to the AH newbie.

 

[FantasyGuyUK]

Gimmie A Break !!!

Hey Guys,

Gimmie a break you guys i'm a poor helpless newbie !!!

If anyone can help me i'd really be grateful.

thanks

 

[Guest]

Hi there,

i'm a first time story writer, but i feel i need an experienced females input.

This is to present realistic female characters and genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and prespectives.

i have a few ideas already but im grateful for any input.

Thanks

FantasyGuyUK

OK... realistic female characters: Do you know how much territory that covers?
Female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and prespectives (sic): ditto.

Contrary to what you may believe, it's quite possible to write opposite-sex characters credibly. It's done all the time. I've done it. But the key word is "write."

So, instead of posing extremely general and largely unanwerable questions, how about you actually write something that folks can react to? (By the way, if you're a novice writer, be prepared to be savaged.... but it'll be a growth experience.)

 

[FantasyGuyUK]

Thanks

Thats great, i know i'll have to do a lot of learning through feedback and responses i get to my stories, hopefully they will benefit from this. I just want them to be realistic and some what believable.

 

[foolishlittleone]

Hey Guys,

Gimmie a break you guys i'm a poor helpless newbie !!!

If anyone can help me i'd really be grateful.

thanks

Why don't you toss out the ideas you have and ask for feedback? You might also edit your initial post: "seeked" should be "sought", the pronoun "I" should be capitalized, "experienced females" needs an apostrophe (inverted comma in Brit speak). Being a newbie doesn't excuse writing bad simple sentences.

You'll find people here very helpful but you need to put a little bit of effort into communicating.

 

[Guest]

Thats great, i know i'll have to do a lot of learning through feedback and responses i get to my stories, hopefully they will benefit from this. I just want them to be realistic and some what believable.

Then you need to read--a lot. Look for similarities in how well-drawn female characters behave, react, think, and feel. Then look for how they differ.

Once you've done a lot of that, you'll have at least a starting place for your characters.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Do we actually write realistic female shit? I though we wrote porn

I think this guy is trying to change us for some deviant purpose.

 

[where]

Do we actually write realistic female shit? I though we wrote porn

I think this guy is trying to change us for some deviant purpose.

but think. If only megawriter had posted this?

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

but think. If only megawriter had posted this?

Yeah. Nobody would have been able to read the 4000 word paragraphs

 

[gauchecritic]

Well I have comments on one of my stories written from a female pov addressing me as female.

I also have a female alt with one story that got mail by the bucketload.

Is that enough experience or do I need tits and a cunt to qualify?

 

[noisymother]

Here's my thoughts - just because you are a woman doesn't mean you think like every other woman. I'm not sure there's such a thing as genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and perspectives. Basically we're all people and some men are more feminine than some men . . .

I'm sorry - that's probably not terribly helpful. I don't think women are that different from men on the whole. Just consider your characters as people - think about them as individuals - that's the key

Hi there,

i'm a first time story writer, but i feel i need an experienced females input.

This is to present realistic female characters and genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and prespectives.

i have a few ideas already but im grateful for any input.

Thanks

FantasyGuyUK

 

[where]

Thats great, i know i'll have to do a lot of learning through feedback and responses i get to my stories, hopefully they will benefit from this. I just want them to be realistic and some what believable.

actually, you won't learn much from feedback on the stories. According to f/b I've had I'm the greatest eroticist ever and also a pile of bitch cum (I'm assuming that's bad) that needs to learn some manners.

For what it's worth, I find it really difficult writing from a male POV and so avoid it. It just looks forced to me. That won't stop me submitting it when I finally get it edited though

 

[oggbashan]

Well I have comments on one of my stories written from a female pov addressing me as female.

I also have a female alt with one story that got mail by the bucketload.

Is that enough experience or do I need tits and a cunt to qualify?

Jeanne D'Artois wouldn't think so. "She" gets *interesting* propositions that I'd find it difficult to accept.

Og

 

[where]

Here's my thoughts - just because you are a woman doesn't mean you think like every other woman. I'm not sure there's such a thing as genuine female reactions/movements/sexual feeling and perspectives. Basically we're all people and some men are more feminine than some men . . .

I'm sorry - that's probably not terribly helpful. I don't think women are that different from men on the whole. Just consider your characters as people - think about them as individuals - that's the key

That ^ is a much better approach!

 

[Guest]

Jeanne D'Artois wouldn't think so. "She" gets *interesting* propositions that I'd find it difficult to accept.

Og

But Og.

She's a slut.

 

[oggbashan]

But Og.

She's a slut.

You noticed?

She keeps raiding my stock of feelthy pictures.

Og

 

[Guest]

You noticed?

She keeps raiding my stock of feelthy pictures.

Og

 

[Stella_Omega]

I guess, the question is-- what part of the female perspective do you need to get a handle on?

Emotions and desires-- just about the same as men, actually. If your character comes off as a little "masculine" no sweat, some women are.

As far as genital sensations-- women do NOT feel cum shooting into their pussy. Honest.

Women also do not "become moist" suddenly. A woman can get turned on suddenly, but the "moist" happens a little slower... It's like precome. Hardon first, precome after a little while. Of course, some guys start dribbling instantly-- so do some women, so nothing is cut in stone.

I'd say, going for it is the best way to learn!