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[Grim777]

Looking to chat with some nice ladies, also working on my novel, trying to write a sex scene and wondering how my wording could be improved. What descriptions get you all tingly? Post here or PM me.

 

[Grim777]

What kind of wording is sexier? Direct description of the act itself or focusing on the act and the process?
Examples:
"He smiled as he pinched her nipples, her back arching in pleasure."
"He ran his hands over her soft and pale breasts, allowing his fingers to linger over her nipples before he gently pinched them."

 

[Lollygirl26]

What kind of wording is sexier? Direct description of the act itself or focusing on the act and the process?
Examples:
"He smiled as he pinched her nipples, her back arching in pleasure."
"He ran his hands over her soft and pale breasts, allowing his fingers to linger over her nipples before he gently pinched them."

Depends on the story. Some novels one would work and others don't. Hows the rest being written?