Feedback?

[MrWhiteTiger]

Any compassionate (!) person like to review my story? Honest feedback appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=418459

Cheers, MrWhiteTiger

Vancouver, Canada

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Any compassionate (!) person like to review my story? Honest feedback appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=418459

Cheers, MrWhiteTiger

Vancouver, Canada

Why don't you put this in the Feedback Forum. Those people are voracious man eaters over there.