Feedback would be greatly appreciated

[NobodysSquirrel]

I had spent about two weeks debating as to wether or not I should post some of my poems, after finaly pushing the enter key with much deliberation I am now wondering what people actually think of my poetry. This is the first time I have ever posted any of my work and I would greatly appreciate any feedback in response to my poems. I have only posted a few thus far, and I am currently working on an erotic story, I'm hoping that the feedback I recieve may assist me in writing my first story.

Much Thanks

Lots of Love
Squirrel

 

[Bluetrain]

it might be helpful to post your poem's url's here. I tried looking for them unsuccessfuly (the poems, not the url's)......

 

[NobodysSquirrel]

Thanks

Thanks Bluetrain,

I found the url's and posted them below...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17892

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17523

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17890

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17891

Lots of Love,
Squirrel

ps:maybe now people can post feedback to my poetry?!