Feedback would be greatly appreciated

[Guest]

I had spent about two weeks debating as to wether or not I should post some of my poems, after finaly pushing the enter key with much deliberation I am now wondering what people actually think of my poetry. This is the first time I have ever posted any of my work and I would greatly appreciate any feedback in response to my poems. I have only posted a few thus far, and I am currently working on an erotic story, I'm hoping that the feedback I recieve may assist me in writing my first story.

Much Thanks

Lots of Love
Squirrel

 

[NobodysSquirrel]

oops!

Ok, so im new at this....
If you could please disregard this post and go to the one where I am actually registerd, that would be great!