Feedback Sissy goes to military school

[Tranylvr]

I'm very new here. I'm delighted by my reader feedback. I would like more feedback from authors so that I may improve.

https://www.literotica.com/s/sissy-to-military-school-pt-01

https://www.literotica.com/s/sissy-to-military-school-pt-02

 

[LesDesirable]

Not a lot to say, it is primarily a sex story, and appears as if it is going to develop along those lines rather than into the deep character development you hinted at in chapter 1. We know basically who the current 3 characters are, but all they have done is shower, eat, and have sex. Not much military discipline going on, or much school, or anything other than the time off for sex. Perhaps Stephen's father should have done better research before enrolling his wayward son in this particular school?

Anyway, given the scenario, setting and genre, I am sure your readers will be more than satisfied by the story you are writing.

Writing is good enough, few mistakes in grammar or style. Good job.