BacchusLives
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- Oct 29, 2013
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Title is, as you may have guessed, Bully Learns Her Lesson. Got thrown in NonConsensual/Reluctance. I didn't put it there, because the girl gives explicit or implicit consent at more-or-less every stage, without coercion.
The premise is: a guy meets his middle school bully at a bar and winds up grudge-fucking her.
Rough sex/revenge sex/hate fucking/grudge-fucking. Facefucking only. A little bit mean-spirited. If that's not your thing, the story won't be your thing. I understand and respect that.
Leaving aside such purely taste-related matters, how is it? Technical errors? Content errors? Weird paragraph breaks during the sex, character voices are indistinguishable, overuse of certain words, excess detail, lack of detail where important, etc?
The premise is: a guy meets his middle school bully at a bar and winds up grudge-fucking her.
Rough sex/revenge sex/hate fucking/grudge-fucking. Facefucking only. A little bit mean-spirited. If that's not your thing, the story won't be your thing. I understand and respect that.
Leaving aside such purely taste-related matters, how is it? Technical errors? Content errors? Weird paragraph breaks during the sex, character voices are indistinguishable, overuse of certain words, excess detail, lack of detail where important, etc?
