Hi all,
I had my first story posted and so far it seems to be getting some nice comments. I don't mind that it's only a few, but I'd quite like to hear your views on it.
It's in Exhibitionist/Voyeur but could've quite easily gone into Toys/Masturbation as there is an element of that in it.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427570
I'd love to know what you think!
Comments and critique appreciated.
Thanks in advance
xx
I had my first story posted and so far it seems to be getting some nice comments. I don't mind that it's only a few, but I'd quite like to hear your views on it.
It's in Exhibitionist/Voyeur but could've quite easily gone into Toys/Masturbation as there is an element of that in it.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427570
I'd love to know what you think!
Comments and critique appreciated.
Thanks in advance
xx
