Feedback Request: Love, A Short Trilogy

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

Greetings,

My name is Robert, aka "LoveIsAllYouNeed" ("liayn" for short).

I'm new, and before I offer any feedback I thought it might make it more meaningful if you have judged my skill for yourself.

I would appreciate having my story: "Love, A Short Trilogy" reviewed.

It is a BDSM story. I have not found it in that section yet. It is still in the New section.

The link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427604&page=1

Thank you for your time.

I hope you enjoy the story.

namaste,
Robert

 

[LoveIsAllYouNeed]

Thank you

Thank you to all who have taken the time to read my story.

I am especially grateful to those of you who have voted. I am truly touched and encouraged by your support.

To those of you who have left comments or sent messages, namaste.

As I am feeling a "Sally Fields" moment coming on, I think I'll excuse myself here before I embarass myself.

Thank you.