This was my first time up at the plate, so I'm a rookie who would love love to get feedback. Thanks!
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"It's so nice to meet you, Adam. You are really my knight in shining armor here. Thank you for taking time to give me information."
I had crashed and burned. I would have to be content with the fact that I was really nice to somebody, but I didn't get anything in return.
Yeah... I'm getting that feeling the more I read this. This feels like your fantasy about some chick you tried to hit on and got turned down mercilessly, or never ended up talking to her at all. Blunt, but true.
That's actually the motivation behind any non con story written and read by a male. That's how they show 'dem bitches'
And, if you want more in the protagonist, why not more on the Romanian woman too. Surely, she has a more interesting "how I got here" back story. Of course, it too probably would be irrelevant to the storyline.
One last thing. This is something we all have a tendency to do: We are always starting, beginning someting. Must one "start kissing her breasts", or can one merely "kiss" them.