Feedback Request for Two new Stories

[DanDraper]

I was hoping to get some of your thoughts on my two recent stories.
These took me some time to get the details correct for what I had in mind, I hope you enjoy them.

Con games - Erotic Couplings - A con artist finds she's being conned herself.
https://www.literotica.com/s/con-games


Bad Kisser - Humor section - A terrible kisser gets some much needed lessons.
https://www.literotica.com/s/bad-kisser


Thank you.



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[yukonnights]

I read Bad Kisser and enjoyed the story for it's uniqueness and fun. Definitely not something I could have thought up.

I did run across this that appears to be a typo near the end of the story when they we're in bed; 'They turned over, and Jessica was now on top of him. Ethan just laid there, watching Jessica bounce around his dick and her big teeth bounce around.' < I'm assuming that was meant to be 'big tits'?

 

[DanDraper]

I read Bad Kisser and enjoyed the story for it's uniqueness and fun. Definitely not something I could have thought up.

I did run across this that appears to be a typo near the end of the story when they we're in bed; 'They turned over, and Jessica was now on top of him. Ethan just laid there, watching Jessica bounce around his dick and her big teeth bounce around.' < I'm assuming that was meant to be 'big tits'?

LOL that's embarrassing. It was probably from the last spell check and I wasn't paying attention. I'll make the correction. Thanks for pointing that out.



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