Hi folks!
Can I get a review of "Butter Pecan", https://www.literotica.com/s/butter-pecan
I'm a bit surprised at the lower scores, even in LW, and would like some feedback from other authors to try to improve, since I have more coming, and want decent scores. Even more discouraging, I get very little feedback from comments, and it appears my reader numbers are very low for the categories.
Edit to add
Ok, so.. scratch half of that. There's a weird timing mechanism on LW stories, I guess, with brief highly negative responses, with few or no comments, followed by a US West coast response 12 hours later, that seemed more balanced. At the same time, the initial negative comments came in, creating a weird "People hate the story, but are voting like they like it". It appears there is just a crowd of folks that get on within the first hour to blast any and all stories after they post, before it settles down to folks who read them.
I'm still not sure why my other story only had a single brief surge before pestering down to 20 readers a day after 2 or 3 days (until 'Butter Pecan'... it appears some readers liked the story enough to downvote my other story)
I'd still appreciate feedback from other writers as to how I can improve my writing. Have two more working, but just got news a few hours ago that may cause both of them to be delayed substantially, so if I'm going to lose volume, I have to make them higher quality.
Can I get a review of "Butter Pecan", https://www.literotica.com/s/butter-pecan
I'm a bit surprised at the lower scores, even in LW, and would like some feedback from other authors to try to improve, since I have more coming, and want decent scores. Even more discouraging, I get very little feedback from comments, and it appears my reader numbers are very low for the categories.
Edit to add
Ok, so.. scratch half of that. There's a weird timing mechanism on LW stories, I guess, with brief highly negative responses, with few or no comments, followed by a US West coast response 12 hours later, that seemed more balanced. At the same time, the initial negative comments came in, creating a weird "People hate the story, but are voting like they like it". It appears there is just a crowd of folks that get on within the first hour to blast any and all stories after they post, before it settles down to folks who read them.
I'm still not sure why my other story only had a single brief surge before pestering down to 20 readers a day after 2 or 3 days (until 'Butter Pecan'... it appears some readers liked the story enough to downvote my other story)
I'd still appreciate feedback from other writers as to how I can improve my writing. Have two more working, but just got news a few hours ago that may cause both of them to be delayed substantially, so if I'm going to lose volume, I have to make them higher quality.
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