JasonClearwater
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On the very small off-chance there's anyone looking at these threads who's read the series over in non-con, I've just lost access to a good friend and valuable feedback partner, and I'm rather nervous about posting the last piece, which I've re-written several different ways to date, without their feedback.
It's a 16,000 word final installment that caps the 15 part series off, and it's got a fair whack of story in it (and a HEA).
I'll do a tight self-edit before I post it, so it's not so much an edit as a beta read.
My key concern is how I wrap the story up, balancing the non-con aspects with the story, to make sure it has the right mix of being arousing, building some kind of suspense, doesn't drag, and doesn't leave a bad taste. There's also a sniff of romance in there (what can I say, some folk have rubbed off on me).
I'm aware that this style is not everyone's cup of tea, and neither is my content, so someone who likes the rest of the series would be immensely helpful.
If you're willing to check it out, please PM me.
Much appreciated,
Jase.
PS: *sings* Baby come back...
It's a 16,000 word final installment that caps the 15 part series off, and it's got a fair whack of story in it (and a HEA).
I'll do a tight self-edit before I post it, so it's not so much an edit as a beta read.
My key concern is how I wrap the story up, balancing the non-con aspects with the story, to make sure it has the right mix of being arousing, building some kind of suspense, doesn't drag, and doesn't leave a bad taste. There's also a sniff of romance in there (what can I say, some folk have rubbed off on me).
I'm aware that this style is not everyone's cup of tea, and neither is my content, so someone who likes the rest of the series would be immensely helpful.
If you're willing to check it out, please PM me.
Much appreciated,
Jase.
PS: *sings* Baby come back...
