feedback, please

[KatPurrs]

I would love to have some feedback on this poem.
Thanks!!!! Kat~

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20312

 

[Storyguy]

Cool poem . . .

Here, kitty, kitty, kitty . . . ..

I liked the poem, although it involves a subject I am not interested in . . . . .

I liked the use of repetition and your word play. The scansion could use a little cleaning up to make it more fluid and uniform - if that was your intention. Technicalities don't bother some people. If you weren't going for that, then don't worry about it.

BTW - I gave it a 4!

 

[Eve_of_destruction]

I liked it very much! This dom didn't mince words, she knew what she wanted and she expected to get it! I gave it a "5".

EOD