Feedback please.....I think this one sucks!

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Feedback please

Please tell me what you think of this story. If you have read my first 2 your feedback would be greatly appreciated. If you haven't read my first 2 I would still like your thoughts. I don't think this one is as good, but you be the judge.



One Night of Passion
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59095

 

[pinklipstick]

Just a question:

If you think it sucks, what is the motivation for anyone else to read it?

 

[peachykeen]

just what I was thinking, pink

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Thank You

Ok you are both right, never thought of it that way. I guess if I want feedback I don't want to deture readers from it, if it is bad then they can offer that opinion to me without my planting the bad seed. I changed the subject line I hope it helps.
Thanks for bringing this to my attention.
Wicked

 

[SlickTony]

I would have liked it better had it not been written in 2nd person.