Feedback on The Big Blonde?

PrevertOne

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Hello. The Preve (Prevert-One) here. I'm looking for feedback on a story I wrote: The Big Blonde...Pinkie Invasion (Full title: The Big Blonde, The Big Schlong, and The Great Pinkie Invasion). It's Humor & Satire. It's the longest story I wrote, and the strangest I think. It got buried along with a lot of other stories so I don't think many people noticed it. I just want to know what people think, that's all.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-big-blonde-pinkie-invasion
 
Just another attempt to elicit feedback. Someone? Anyone? Crickets chirping....
 
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