lovecraft68
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Okay here goes going to lay myself open on this one and see what happens. I am writing a long series on lit and parts of it are for a more "serious" less sexed up project down the line. I hope someday to publish a "real" novel involving these characters and here and there have put some of the more mainstream type material into my chapters. I have gotten good feed backs from the readers but 29 chapters in these are the die hards and I am sure a bit biased. So I want to try it here.
Now it is an incest series however the part I want feedback on is the first third to half;"The Winthrop Trial" it is admittedly a bit larger than life but I feel has a decent flow to it and some people have said it was described well. This is what I am looking for opinions on. I am linking the chapter and feel free to read the entire thing but a couple of warnings:
It is incest so when you get to the part at O'Hara airport there is an incestuous sex scene. If you choose to keep going there is another scene and it is a bit tough. It is rough-although consensual-sex, complete with bondage so you may want to stop there. it is up to you but don't want you walking into anything that you may not be into. Of course this is #26 and every detail may not make sense but you will get the gist. Samantha is Mark's ex lover and a former "pet" who he fell in love with then broke her heart so she would leave him because she had no idea how messed up he really is. that should be the only detail you may need.
So here is the link and looking forward to any feed back good bad or indifferent you may have for me.
http://www.literotica.com/s/siblings-with-benefits-ch-26
Now it is an incest series however the part I want feedback on is the first third to half;"The Winthrop Trial" it is admittedly a bit larger than life but I feel has a decent flow to it and some people have said it was described well. This is what I am looking for opinions on. I am linking the chapter and feel free to read the entire thing but a couple of warnings:
It is incest so when you get to the part at O'Hara airport there is an incestuous sex scene. If you choose to keep going there is another scene and it is a bit tough. It is rough-although consensual-sex, complete with bondage so you may want to stop there. it is up to you but don't want you walking into anything that you may not be into. Of course this is #26 and every detail may not make sense but you will get the gist. Samantha is Mark's ex lover and a former "pet" who he fell in love with then broke her heart so she would leave him because she had no idea how messed up he really is. that should be the only detail you may need.
So here is the link and looking forward to any feed back good bad or indifferent you may have for me.
http://www.literotica.com/s/siblings-with-benefits-ch-26
