thebobber326
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I recently wrote a story for somebody else on the site and I am looking for as much feedback (good or bad) as I can get. This felt pretty different from what I normally write. In most of my stories, there is typically complete domination interrupted by some struggle, but here it was a lot more back and forth and any fight that was in these stories was just a small scene in a larger story as opposed to the focus. Any comments are greatly appreciated!
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight-ch-02
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight
https://literotica.com/s/teacher-catfight-ch-02
