Feedback on my First Story - Husband with Wife, Her Sisters, Her Brother, Their Mom

Guessing that you're new here. :)

This forum is for feedback on stories that have been posted to the story side of Literotica -- stories that people wrote and submitted and were posted by Laurel, who runs the site with Manu. The site does have a few rules, and posting here is not the way to get around them.

If you'd like some input on a story before it's posted, you could post about three graphs and see what people say, and/or look for an editor or beta reader to work with (check the Editor's Hangout).
 
Most of the stories at LIT are like this one. Write something that's not been written before. PILOT has all the AT LEAST I TRIED trophies, get one from him.
 
Had no idea about the rules. Sorry guys. Please ignore.

No problem; it's a common thing. But you can go back to your original post and edit it (as I think you've already done). Leave two or three graphs that highlight your style, or what you'd like people to comment on, if you want. Or check out the sticky for this month's available editors on the Editor's Hangout and see if there's anyone you can work with.

Finding an editor and/or beta reader can be a process of trial and error, but if you find someone that works well with you, it's worth it.
 
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