Feedback on My Newest Work
I mostly write erotica to "blow off steam" so to speak. I have been wanting to get more seriously into it, since it flexes a lot of writing muscles I'm not used to.
I was wondering if I could get some honest feedback on my current works? Most I've gotten is "the intercourse is too short for all the build up".
This is my most recent work, part one in my series:
https://www.literotica.com/s/like-an-accident-pt-01
I mostly write erotica to "blow off steam" so to speak. I have been wanting to get more seriously into it, since it flexes a lot of writing muscles I'm not used to.
I was wondering if I could get some honest feedback on my current works? Most I've gotten is "the intercourse is too short for all the build up".
This is my most recent work, part one in my series:
https://www.literotica.com/s/like-an-accident-pt-01
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