Feedback on My BBW Cuckold Story

[AGD1704]

Anyone want to share any thoughts on my first submission?

It wasn't for everyone, which is clear from all the comments telling me never to write anything ever again.

But for the others who want me to keep writing and thought it was hot... What did you like about it? Which parts did you find erotic.

Currently working on part II...

 

[Valint]

Femdom stories are likely to do better in BDSM or Fetish. You should probably avoid posting them in LW unless you actually have a masochism fetish you're trying to fulfill.

 

[hadruprider]

Link

https://www.literotica.com/s/my-bbw-cuckold-story

Ignore the idiot anon comments. In fact you can delete them if you like. If you look at other stories in the same category you will see most of them get the same treatment. See this one as just a random example
https://www.literotica.com/s/my-roommates-boyfriend-1

It's a good story and the writing is generally good too. It's a bit formulaic - you know from the start what is going to happen, and it happens.