Feedback needed - Did my experiment work?

Eutopia

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I'm currently dabbling in the human x non-human erotic scene, with a twist.I'm doing a female x male android set of one-shots. This having been my first time writing about a robot, I found it hard to keep the plainly robotic demeanor about him, but still keep the twitch of humanity I've been trying to grow in him. He's a bit different and I like him that way. But I still want him to be a robot. I'm being very confusing, aren't I?

All in all, I'd like some feedback on these two stories I've written thus far.
Do you think I've managed to make him a man, but still a robot? Are the characters any good? Were the sex scenes arousing? Etcetera, etcetera.

Story.


Part 1.

Part 2.
 
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