Feedback from Laura & Lisa

[Lovepotion69]

Got two today for my latest submission, does this mean I'm finally a confirmed Lit author?


Comments:

Eric: We are pleading with you not to ruin your marriage for your enjoyment. If you keep this up, we guarantee you wukk loose Gina. Are your games worth it? Remember, if she chockolds or leaves you, it is your fault. Leave it be right now. Laura & Lisa NO VOTE


Comments:

Eric, if you truly loved and respected your wife, you would not have asked her to break her marriage vows for your entertainment. Did you ever think she might like soneone else? This story is too much like swinging which we do to approve
of. Laura & Lisa NO VOTE

 

[Seattle Zack]

Any feedback addressed directly to the story characters rates a five, in my book.

Congrats.

 

[Icingsugar]

Yay for you.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Are Laura and Lisa are like the two guys on that movie review show, where they both give a Big Thumbs Up or a Thumbs Down or a Thumbs In One Another's...

---dr.M.

 

[pop_54]

Well done love

Well done love you've finally made it to the big time Wow Laura & lisa, shit that's heavy stuff

beats my last feedback.

Quote: You sick bastard, it's people like you who encourage the rapists and pedos of this world. You should stop it before you get in trouble.

Annon.

That was in appreciation of an incest story by the way.

 

[Icingsugar]

Are Laura and Lisa are like the two guys on that movie review show, where they both give a Big Thumbs Up or a Thumbs Down or a Thumbs In One Another's...

---dr.M.

Does that require opposing thumbs?
Because I'm having some serous suspicions about L&L...

 

[Guest]

This is my latest feedback: "Your picture makes my cock as hard as your stories!" sent by anon, of course. It's nice to know my stories hit the spot, though.

I want some nice juicy controversial stuff, like you've received. I am not worthy. Why am I being left out?

Lou, building a bomb shelter, in preparation for the world to see chapter 5 of my series.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

This is my latest feedback: "Your picture makes my cock as hard as your stories!" sent by anon, of course. It's nice to know my stories hit the spot, though.

Hmmm. Ambiguous. Does this mean that your picture makes his cock as hard as your stories make his cock? Or that your picture makes his cock as hard as your stories are for anon to understand?


---dr.M.

 

[Guest]

Hmmm. Ambiguous. Does this mean that your picture makes his cock as hard as your stories make his cock? Or that your picture makes his cock as hard as your stories are for anon to understand?


---dr.M.

I pondered over those two choices myself, when I first received the feedback. I came to the conclusion that the former was the case, I don't think anon could have found them that hard to understand.

Lou

 

[pop_54]

Ha!!!!!

I pondered over those two choices myself, when I first received the feedback. I came to the conclusion that the former was the case, I don't think anon could have found them that hard to understand.

Lou

yea it was definitely your picture I was writing about in the feedback Lou

 

[Guest]

Re: Ha!!!!!

yea it was definitely your picture I was writing about in the feedback Lou

I might've guessed.

Lou

 

[Dirty Slut]

Laura & Lisa Feedback...

If you get feedback from them you can bet that your story's ratings have plumeted. I don't know who they really are, but everytime I get feedback from them my ratings droped a whole number, and put my story out of the running for the monthly contest. And the thing is that story was above 4.5 before they hit it.

DS

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Sue, you should have pointed the cam at Christina and introduced her to Harry as your neighbor and what a good cunt lapper she is. We would like to know why you are still hanging out with that controling butch Christina?
Laura & Lisa, the bi girls NO VOTE

Appears I am the next victim

 

[Colleen Thomas]

And more, on the same story

So Christa is still controling Sue and she loves it. At this point you can stop with your sick writing, so please do not write and post another series or chapter. Next, pleas seek theraphy, you need it.
Laura & Lisa, the bi girls NO VOTE

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Jeeze:

Sue, if 2 your co workers know that you are gay, the word is going to spread like wildfire and before you know it, your husband will hear the news. What are you going to tell him? If you want to pose nude, then you are a slut.
Laura & Lisa, the bi girls NO VOTE

 

[Colleen Thomas]

It goes on for about ten more. Sorry for filling the thread, I didn't realize it.

-Colly

 

[Lovepotion69]

Well, I had a 4.69 score then by 74 votes, now it's 4.52 and 137 votes. I'm getting used to the scores getting lower and lower. Ha Ha Dunno if it's L&L's fault though, perhaps people just didn't vote as high later.

They're the only ones that has given bad criticism so far, apart from another reader who felt I disappointed him by not having the wife screw another man. Of course another reader particularly liked that part. Can't win them all.

 

[MathGirl]

Re: Well done love

Quote: You sick bastard, it's people like you who encourage the rapists and pedos of this world. You should stop it before you get in trouble.
That was in appreciation of an incest story by the way.

Dear Pop,
It sounds like a canned, cut and paste, feedback that Anon sends to everyone. Probably sends the same thing to someone writing nonerotic poetry.
MG
Ps. I want to thank you for expanding my vocabulary. I'm reading Pratchett's "The Last Continent" for about the third time. From your posts here, I knew what the terms, "Wooly jumper," "Technicolor yawn," and "Chunder" mean.

 

[pop_54]

Re: Re: Well done love

Dear Pop,
It sounds like a canned, cut and paste, feedback that Anon sends to everyone. Probably sends the same thing to someone writing nonerotic poetry.
MG
Ps. I want to thank you for expanding my vocabulary. I'm reading Pratchett's "The Last Continent" for about the third time. From your posts here, I knew what the terms, "Wooly jumper," "Technicolor yawn," and "Chunder" mean.

Chuckle No sweat luv, I'm a graduate of the English university of life, same one Pratchett attended

Yep the old regular can't stand anything feedback poster, I think he/she sent the same one to Delia Smith after reading her cook books.