Feedback for story sequel: Perfect Strangers Ch. 02

[AnastasiaAllis]

After publishing my first story, feedbacks were mostly positive, but there were a lot of comments regarding grammar, which is understandable given that engish is not my native language.

Thanks to advice of good people of literotica, I found an editor who was willing to help me out craft the story sequel better.
Many many thanks to him. I am not sure is it against the rules to mention who is it, or does he have something against being mentioned.

Anyways, sequel to my story is live for sometime (but there were some issues with me messing up the title, so I waited for the edit)

Perfect Strangers Ch. 02

 

[ElectricBlue]

Many many thanks to him. I am not sure is it against the rules to mention who is it, or does he have something against being mentioned.

It up to you and your editor as to whether you acknowledge him or not. Some don't mind being acknowledged, others prefer not to be. But don't acknowledge without his explicit permission.