Feedback for my pitch perfect twincest stories.

[Blue_Gator]

Anyone wanna give my pitch perfect lesbian twincest stories a read?

Fair warning if you haven’t seen the movies then you might be a little bit lost. Also the actual incest doesn’t technically happen until the third story Unholy, which I’m most proud of.

Drop some comments if you like them.

 

[lovecraft68]

People here tend to be kind of lazy and don't like to search for things so its always best to link the story or your page

Here's the OP's page.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5850350&page=submissions

 

[Blue_Gator]

Thank you

 

[8letters]

Many people will tell you, "Write what you want." I think this case is one of those where writing what you wanted resulted in a story with a tiny audience. C&FF doesn't get a lot of views, and I'd bet that a lot of that readership is turned off by incest. If you could make "Unholy" a stand-alone story and post it in I/T, I think you would get a lot more reads, comments, etc.

 

[Blue_Gator]

Many people will tell you, "Write what you want." I think this case is one of those where writing what you wanted resulted in a story with a tiny audience. C&FF doesn't get a lot of views, and I'd bet that a lot of that readership is turned off by incest. If you could make "Unholy" a stand-alone story and post it in I/T, I think you would get a lot more reads, comments, etc.

Hmmm…you’ve given me something to consider.