Feedback for my first submission

[blackrose_216]

Ok, I finally submitted my first story. So read it and let me know what you think! <3 It's called "Night In Need".

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Ok, I finally submitted my first story. So read it and let me know what you think! <3 It's called "Night In Need".

I don't see the story either in our page or in the new stories, Blackrose. Has it been posted yet? If so, LINK??

 

[luke3245]

Ok, I finally submitted my first story. So read it and let me know what you think! <3 It's called "Night In Need".

so how do you find it??

 

[blackrose_216]

just found out its not gonna go through for another few days but if you want to read it, its on my deviantart ^_^

http://rosieraven.deviantart.com