Feedback for Making Scents

[Boratus]

Hello All,

I'm currently writing a story called Making Scents. This is a new endeavour for me since most of my stories have been serious and intense. This time I'm tryng to keep the it humourous while maintaining a, shall we say, arousing level of sexuality and, of course, a compelling story line.

I have received good ratings but very little in Feedback and would appreciate some constructive criticism.

There are 5 chapters currently out, but I believe I've created an interesting way to let you pick up any chapter and just start reading. This is another thing I'd like some feedback on.

You can find it at http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=121916&page=submissions


Thanks,
Boratus

 

[Boratus]

No takers? :-(

 

[Bitch2003]

Boratus, I am reading your story, however, I do have very limited time. It may take me a bit to get it finished.

As we know, I am still learning this writing thing, however, I do enjoy reading good stories. If you would like I can give you some feedback when I am finished.

So far, I really like what I am reading!

Bitch

 

[Boratus]

Boratus, I am reading your story, however, I do have very limited time. It may take me a bit to get it finished.

As we know, I am still learning this writing thing, however, I do enjoy reading good stories. If you would like I can give you some feedback when I am finished.

So far, I really like what I am reading!

Bitch

Thanks, Bitch. Looking forward to the feedback.

 

[Boratus]

a final plea

I haven't received a stitch of feedback since originally posting this. Is the story so boring that it's putting people to sleep before they have a chance to comment? I'm leaving the country on the 12th. Any feedback before then would be appreciated as I will have no internet for 3 months. (Any feedback after that would be great to come home to. ) Just pick a chapter under your favourite heading and start reading.