Feedback for first time author

Incest category story "Andy and His Mom". If you've read it please rate it below!

  • Great!

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • Good

    Votes: 1 33.3%
  • Needs some work

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Average

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Needs fair bit of work

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Needs a lot of work

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Sucks!

    Votes: 1 33.3%

  • Total voters
    3
  • Poll closed .

Truewind

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Hi! My first time effort has just been added, and I would greatly appreciate feedback on it. The details are as follows:

Author: Truewind
Title: Andy and His Mom
Category: Incest
Address: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=83305

After reading the story please send me an e-mail with your comments and/or include the name of the story and follow it with the number from the list below which you feel best describes your main thought or reaction to the story. Alternatively, you could simply take part in the poll above!

Thank you in advance for your time and assistance.
  1. Great!
  2. Good
  3. Needs some work
  4. Average
  5. Needs fair amount of work
  6. Needs a lot of work
  7. Sucks!
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