Feedback: First Story, Submission, looking for an editor.

[lehmankm]

The story "The Platform" is my first attempt at writing. Would love some feedback...
Would greatly appreciate any feedback, comments, etc.
The story centers on a couple trying to save a marriage thru "soft submission", among other things...

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Has this been published yet? Can you link to the story?

 

[lehmankm]

Has this been published yet? Can you link to the story?

Story has not been published. Thought I would run it by an editor first. It is not linked. Have copy in text format attached to a draft email. Waiting to be sent to an interested editor.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Oh, got it. The story feedback forum is typically for published stories. I'll send you my email over direct message

 

[THoney269]

Story has not been published. Thought I would run it by an editor first. It is not linked. Have copy in text format attached to a draft email. Waiting to be sent to an interested editor.

I'd be willing to help..will DM email to you

 

[lehmankm]

Sorry, I have sent the story to an editor. If I do not hear from him/her I will contact you. Thank you for your time and interest.