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Kikori

Burning My Dread
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While getting my car's tags renewed (I know, odd place to be thinking of sex stories), I wound up forgetting the few stories I have nearly completed (mainly anthromorph stories) and thinking of a few other genres that I'd enjoyed reding about. One specific amazon story came to mind, and I wondered what kind I could create to add to the female society fetish.

I wound up thinking of this, and I want to know if it would be too odd, or a welcome change, or if it's been done before.

Basically, a guy (tall, slender, long hair, not the most masculine looking man you've seen) winds up seeing amazons invading. He runs away from his neighborhood, passing a construction zone and getting into light woods further away. He trips, knocks his head, and winds up writhing around long enough to be noticed. He avoids being killed by not letting out any sounds that require voice except for a passable feminine whimper, out of fear. He convinces them that he's a girl who was pushed out of the city using drawings, and is taken in by the ladies who caught him.
As soon as he can he tries to appear as feminine as possible, and learns to keep from using his voice in any way possible, even when hurt. He learns a form of sign language to be able to talk, and being inexperienced in the Amazon's technology, winds up being a maid to soldiers and rising up to the higher-ups due to loyalty and obedience. (If your life was on the line, you'd work your ass off, too.) The lady he winds up with appreciates his undivided loyalty and opens up to him, to which he develops a bond for her. Sweaty scenes ensue after the secret comes out.

Yay, nay?
 
While getting my car's tags renewed (I know, odd place to be thinking of sex stories), I wound up forgetting the few stories I have nearly completed (mainly anthromorph stories) and thinking of a few other genres that I'd enjoyed reding about. One specific amazon story came to mind, and I wondered what kind I could create to add to the female society fetish.

I wound up thinking of this, and I want to know if it would be too odd, or a welcome change, or if it's been done before.

Basically, a guy (tall, slender, long hair, not the most masculine looking man you've seen) winds up seeing amazons invading. He runs away from his neighborhood, passing a construction zone and getting into light woods further away. He trips, knocks his head, and winds up writhing around long enough to be noticed. He avoids being killed by not letting out any sounds that require voice except for a passable feminine whimper, out of fear. He convinces them that he's a girl who was pushed out of the city using drawings, and is taken in by the ladies who caught him.
As soon as he can he tries to appear as feminine as possible, and learns to keep from using his voice in any way possible, even when hurt. He learns a form of sign language to be able to talk, and being inexperienced in the Amazon's technology, winds up being a maid to soldiers and rising up to the higher-ups due to loyalty and obedience. (If your life was on the line, you'd work your ass off, too.) The lady he winds up with appreciates his undivided loyalty and opens up to him, to which he develops a bond for her. Sweaty scenes ensue after the secret comes out.

Yay, nay?
This has two parts to it that have been done, an amazon culture invading a western world or vice-versa, and convincing an all woman society a man is one of them to eventually integrate into sexual practices.
These two things together seem interesting and somewhat original if there is some kind of twist to it.

Maybe another woman (still virgin) is the owner the man, and befriends him while thinking of kinky things she can do to him.
She uses him as a boy toy/sex slave and frequently is topless, has oral sex, and is dry humping him.
When asked to remove her panties, it's revealed it was a man he had sex with.
 
This has two parts to it that have been done, an amazon culture invading a western world or vice-versa, and convincing an all woman society a man is one of them to eventually integrate into sexual practices.
These two things together seem interesting and somewhat original if there is some kind of twist to it.

Maybe another woman (still virgin) is the owner the man, and befriends him while thinking of kinky things she can do to him.
She uses him as a boy toy/sex slave and frequently is topless, has oral sex, and is dry humping him.
When asked to remove her panties, it's revealed it was a man he had sex with.

With amazons, invasion is almost always part of the plot, since they're usually a different race or species altogether.
With the man convincing others that he's a woman, I'm confused if it's been done both for the sex and out of need for his life. I'm sure there are feminine men who have acted as a woman to mingle with amazons, but I haven't seen yet a man who's had to be feminine to survive; examples or links would be welcome here. ^_^;

The ideas you've given me seem to depend on if men are killed or kept as slaves / pets upon invasion. I'll put some thought into that.
 
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