feedback, am I doing this right?

[necrokittie]

O.K. I am new here, and I posted my first story the other day... and I'm just wondering, am I doing it right?
Noone has replied... and now it's all the way on the 5th page... So i thought I would ask.
It's titled Lustfull addictions.
All critisism is welcome, just please try and make it constructive... LOL!
~Necrokittie

 

[mjl2010]

O.K. I am new here, and I posted my first story the other day... and I'm just wondering, am I doing it right?
Noone has replied... and now it's all the way on the 5th page... So i thought I would ask.
It's titled Lustfull addictions.
All critisism is welcome, just please try and make it constructive... LOL!
~Necrokittie

You should post a link to the story

MJL

 

[necrokittie]

OH! good idea, LOL!
here ya go,

my first post

 

[mjl2010]

Hmmm. Interesting. So you're doing this as a role playing thing? Not as an actual authored story?

The premise of the sucubus is an interesting take. Not sure I care for the idea that men in general don't care about the feeling's of their women, although the men in this case didn't.

Story feedback I thought was for authors who had submitted stories that were posted in the story section. You should go read some maybe, get some ideas. Or read a poem. Here's one of mine

MJL

 

[sensorotika]

Post

I think you want to post your story onto the regular site, not as a message board post.

 

[mjl2010]

I think you want to post your story onto the regular site, not as a message board post.

I was trying to point that out rather gently.

MJL

 

[jomar]

submitting stories

Hi necrokittie, welcome to Literotica. I'm pretty new myself. The info on this link will tell you what you need to know.

http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/writ_stor.shtml

and specifically this link to submit stories
http://www.literotica.com/subguide.shtml