Feedback always sought and appreciated...

[Abberlaine]

Heya folks.

I've submitted some smaller things I had done a few years back to Literotica, nothing particular current since I've been so hung up about 'rights'. At this point in time I've returned to writing for the sake of writing, and I'll worry about what goes on with my stories AFTER I finish the novel I'm currently working on. In the mean time I'm still occasionally writing a short story here and there to distract myself (because I love working on 8 projects than just one *g*).

I'd be very grateful if some other authors and some of the readers take some time and read what I've been up to on my site when they've got nothing better to do on the net. I would really appreciate feedback concerning CHARACTER and ATMOSPHERE rather than grammar - since grammar is more easily fixed.

I just would really like to know if the sex is maybe TOO long, or too out of touch, or if the characters really don't have a developed personality.

At any rate, I'll be grateful with what I get.

Cheers folks,
Abberlaine
http://www.envy.nu/abberlaine/

 

[JUDO]

Welcome and...

A -

First of all, welcome to Literotica and thanks for thinking of this place to post a request.

But, the thread you posted in is not the place for feedback requests here (easy first-timer mistake and made often).

Please post it under the "Story & Poetry Feedback" section.

Thanks and good luck!


- Judo

 

[Abberlaine]

Blood

Oops!

Thanks Judo, I appreciate the honesty - the UNDERSTANDING honesty. Not many people would have been as nice. I'll heartily apologize!

Abberlaine