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Nudemodel

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My new story "Interracial Anilingus, Ch 2" was posted.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=19448

I got a couple good comments. I did listen to comments on the first part, "Interracial Anilingus," posted in May. And this new story, "Interracial Anilingus, Ch 2," seems to be better as a result. There's one typo (because its a homonym, and the spellcheck missed it). I'll try to get it corrected, but it is only one in the whole story ("herd" instead of "heard"). Nudemodel
 
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