Feedback always appreciated

[dpingjessie]

I've been writing on this site for several months now but haven't utilized this feature yet. If you have the time, please check out my work. I think it's been met positively thus far, but I don't get as much feedback as I'd like. What do you like? What would make it better? What stories and twists would you like to see in future writings? I'd love to take some of your ideas into account as I go forward.

 

[sr71plt]

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2371259&page=submissions

 

[dpingjessie]

Thanks

Ha, still learning how this site works. Much obliged.

 

[curiosus69]

A bit long-ish text(s)?

Otherwise, quite steamy...

 

[Tigersman]

Category

It would help if you listed what category the story is listed in.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Someone nudge this clown to include a link to his stuff.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

It would help if you listed what category the story is listed in.

Its in NEWB SHIT FOR BRAINS Category.

 

[Tigersman]

Pms

You might want to turn your private messages on, especially if you ever decide to use an editor.

 

[dpingjessie]

Yeah, sorry, brand new to this and still figuring it out . . . I guess I thought my submissions would be linked to my user name . . . .

 

[dpingjessie]

Thanks for the tip. Should be set.

 

[dpingjessie]

Here are my submissions. Sorry about that . . . .

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2371259&page=submissions

 

[Everyday_Man]

Its in NEWB SHIT FOR BRAINS Category.

So mean ... I couldn't help but laugh.

 

[near1111]

thanks

Hi mate, i saw your Story list and their title definitly Sound intresting and seem to be what i like to read here (submission, Domination etc.). i will read few of them at work in few days and write a comment about it.

regards.

 

[sr71plt]

Someone nudge this clown to include a link to his stuff.

Someone nudge THIS clown to read the threads before spouting his bile. The link was given in the second post.