feed back to a new story

[bornagain]

I read a new story called Trust it was a great story about a soldier who married and later went to war over seas it was in the Loving wifes there was no cheating in the story ,But when i went to leave a comment he didnt take anonymous feed backs nor emailthe writer is Kelly hockey can any one tell the writer for me it was very well written it came out today.

 

[kellyhockey]

Hi..

Hi that is my story...It show that it is not yet published. ??

I guess I am misisng something...

What part have your read ?

Thanks

 

[flavortang]

I read a new story called Trust it was a great story about a soldier who married and later went to war over seas it was in the Loving wifes there was no cheating in the story ,But when i went to leave a comment he didnt take anonymous feed backs nor emailthe writer is Kelly hockey can any one tell the writer for me it was very well written it came out today.

That was a long sentence. I wish I could write sentences that long.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Hi that is my story...It show that it is not yet published. ??

I guess I am misisng something...

What part have your read ?

Thanks

Kelly,

I just checked and your story is most definitely on the NEW list. It could be hours before it finally shows up on your submissions list. Here's the link:

TRUST

Congratulations on having a reader hunt you up. And to both you and bornagain, welcome to the AH.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[bornagain]

Trust

Hy Kelly Hockey,
I`m Pat I`m the guy that saw your story Trust but you should have your spelling rechecked I read the third chapter of trust and its sad that Molly didnt say to Jamie after he told her the guys name who set them up Milton .
She should have someone inside the prison to screw Jamie and make him there bitch.lol
Pat Murray